In drawing out my literacy narrative comic draft, I tried to focus more on the text rather than the pictures. I tried to get the story down before I started creating very detailed drawings. My peers seemed to appreciate that by telling me “it was well written” and “light-hearted” much like I felt the original narrative was. However, I will definitely take their suggestions in my editing process. I will add some more detail and formulate a good conclusion for the end. I also want to put some variation in with panel shape and focus angles on my characters. In all, I felt like this peer editing process was really helpful in seeing what I should and should not change about my comic based on what I saw in the other ones that I read.